Deborah Diemont
Dos MadresPress, 2012
45 pp/42 poems
$15.00
I first had the pleasure of
encountering Deborah Diemont’s work when she submitted a few pieces to a
literary magazine for which I serve as managing editor. She had my attention
immediately because one of the poems was about a drawing by Vincent van Gogh, a
favorite artist of mine. That poem (“Sien with Cigar”) appears in Diemont’s
sonnet-filled collection, Diverting
Angels. But Diemont focuses on far more than art here; she also covers such
topics as childhood, womanhood, travel, nature, love, family, and culture.
The opening poem, “A Modest
Blindness” (named for a Borges essay), reflects this variety of subject matter
in its exuberant celebration of color--a poem-as-kaleidoscope. In fact, the
majority of the sonnets contain some reference to color, thereby invoking not
only sound through her rhymes and emotions through her themes, but also visual
cues which give us a good sense of place. These sensory hints become especially
important in poems where interior lives are the focus, giving the reader an
idea of the physical surroundings when emotional matters are at the fore.
Diemont excels at discussing such
things. Some of her strongest, most devastating poems center on women: “To Dye
or Henna,” a rumination on chemical hair alteration; “Grimm,” calling to mind
Plath’s “Mirror” in its focus on distorted reflections; “Untitled,” showing how
the issues females face as adolescents (body image and criticism, especially)
carry over into adulthood; and, most poignantly, “Grandmother,” in which a
mysterious, semi-broken lady bequeaths to her granddaughter things that may--or
may not--damage her but are beloved nonetheless.
The craft on display here is also
commendable. While I am not personally a fan of rhyme--I often find it too
sing-songy or poorly executed--I appreciate some of the ways in which Diemont
plays with it. For example, the rhyme scheme in the second paragraph of
“Housemate” reads thus: back/life/bike/grass; this bends the rhyme in a way
that pleases my ear and helps Diemont make the sonnet form her own.
For this reader, though, Diemont’s
crowning achievement in Diverting Angels
is “The Poet in Victoria’s Secret™.” Here she provides the reader with a poem
that works so well as a metaphor for writing good poetry that I found myself
experiencing an actual fit of jealousy during the reading of it. If even a
quarter of the poetry being published nowadays sent me--or any reader--into
such paroxysms of admiration, the literary landscape would be a brighter place.
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